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Wondering if your query is good enough? I provide personalized feedback on your query letter and sample chapters to ensure your submission is polished, engaging, and unforgettable. Go through the several packages provided and find the right one for you!
Query + Mini Chapter Critique (up to 15 pages)
$30
Feedback on your query letter and first 10 pages of your manuscript.
Deliverables:
Query critique.
Commentary on pacing, voice, and character introductions in sample chapters.
Query + Full Chapter Critique (up to 30 pages)
$50
Comprehensive feedback on your query letter and 30 pages of your manuscript.
Deliverables:
Query critique.
In-depth developmental feedback on character, plot, and pacing
Add ons
One Revision Round: Add follow-up feedback after revisions for $15 and $25 respectively for the package chosen.
FAQ's
What genres do you work with?
I specialize in Thriller, Mystery, Horror, YA, NA, and Speculative Fiction (Fantasy, Epic Fantasy, Sci-Fi)but I’m open to other genres. Feel free to ask!
What’s included in the critique?
My critiques include detailed feedback on your query letter’s clarity, structure, and hook, plus developmental notes on your sample chapters (characterization, pacing, voice, and more).
How long will it take to receive my critique?
Critiques are typically delivered within 5–7 business days. Expedited services are available for an additional fee.
What format do you deliver feedback in?
You’ll receive a detailed PDF with comments and suggestions on both your query letter and sample chapters.
Do you offer refunds?
Due to the nature of the work, refunds aren’t available. However, I’ll do my best to ensure you’re satisfied with the feedback!
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